tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5748696400786502756.post5233889271875248763..comments2012-08-10T17:13:03.483-07:00Comments on notes from underground: make me a mix tapemindy crandall (pacific madrone)http://www.blogger.com/profile/05445487531505340019noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5748696400786502756.post-1629946991393586212012-05-22T16:15:25.446-07:002012-05-22T16:15:25.446-07:00claud. you're the best...claud. you're the best...mindy crandall (pacific madrone)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05445487531505340019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5748696400786502756.post-651934653667257272012-05-22T10:07:38.352-07:002012-05-22T10:07:38.352-07:00"After the first verbal stumble, the horrible..."After the first verbal stumble, the horrible bright red blush would begin creeping up – creating rosy patches on her cheeks that looked in no way cute and in every way conspicuous, noticeable, laughable." <br /><br />= Wonderful sentence, wonderful construction, wonderful capture. I had to stop reading to say that. Now...back to the story. <br /><br />My opinion first, right? Will I NEVER grow up?<br /><br />love, claudclaudhttp://www.practicalvampireslayer.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5748696400786502756.post-6487400644609546032012-02-27T10:54:49.362-08:002012-02-27T10:54:49.362-08:00thanks, maux!!thanks, maux!!mindy crandall (pacific madrone)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05445487531505340019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5748696400786502756.post-73211689619447126622012-02-27T10:51:42.747-08:002012-02-27T10:51:42.747-08:00i'm with chris. i love it! there are some fant...i'm with chris. i love it! there are some fantastic lines too...my two favorites:<br />"They didn’t realize that that confidence was not real but was just a by-product of being young and thoughtless."<br />" They didn’t realize that bodies and souls were just small animals that grew hateful and ugly without regular petting and attention and care and love."<br />nice job!!mauxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5748696400786502756.post-20054140910754977392012-02-26T21:32:54.130-08:002012-02-26T21:32:54.130-08:00thanks chris!thanks chris!mindy crandall (pacific madrone)https://www.blogger.com/profile/05445487531505340019noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5748696400786502756.post-17593478967009605312012-02-26T13:55:54.640-08:002012-02-26T13:55:54.640-08:00You have nothing to be scared of, because this is ...You have nothing to be scared of, because this is a great story! It is so damn tragic and so identifiable.chriswreckagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13457541238496646702noreply@blogger.com